Sunday, December 5, 2010

The Secret

This poem makes me feel hopefull! If i had people telling me they discovered a secret of life throughout my poem, i'd be delighted. Although the girls forgot the secret rather soon, the idea had remained with them forever. If i were the writer i might want to know the secret that way i don't have to be searching for it forever, but i think that is the point of the poem the more i read. The author can be releaved throughout life by pondering about the secret that the two girls had found.

1 comment:

  1. This is kinda short. :) Maybe a little more? Structure? Figurative language? Something?

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